[2011.06.30] 日本：四面楚歌

引用 migmig 2011-7-2 07:31

除了对权利的盲目渴望
应该是权力。

引用 aihui2003 2011-7-2 07:42

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嗯，呵呵

引用 clover_h 2011-7-2 08:46

that he has gone feral  feral 我认为比起“郁郁寡欢”，，也许“无家可归”更合适。
feral： 野生的，未驯服的。像前半句所提到的，那些狗，现在岂不是“无家可归”了。

引用 aihui2003 2011-7-2 08:51

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嗯，

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 08:55

1)One step ahead of the executioner
原译: 如履薄冰
评: 如果你知道executioner指的是谁，可按字面翻译。

2）The unfathomable Naoto Kan defies both friends and enemies
原译：老谋深算的菅直人  众叛亲离
评：菅直人 defies它人。

3）is giving the impression that he has gone feral.
原译：给人以郁郁寡欢的感觉。
评：feral，请查字典。

总评：楼主不怎么喜欢查字典吧。字典不是给小学生用的，是给大大大学生用的。

引用 aihui2003 2011-7-2 09:30

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谢谢点评，

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:37

Given that politics has been in a state of paralysis since the earthquake, tsunami and nuclear accident on March 11th, it is a fair question.
原译：鉴于3月11号以来的地震、海啸和核事故，日本政治上的停滞状态是有情可原的。
评：it is a fair question指的上一句
Why else but because of a blind craving for power would he defy even his friends within the government who are begging him to resign?

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:39

Yet, either through luck or cunning, Mr Kan has managed to keep one step ahead of those baying for his blood.
上句话点出了One step ahead of the executioner

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:42

supplementary budget中的supplementary 没有译出

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:45

electricity initiative to 。。。
initiative ： a procedure enabling a specified number of voters by petition to propose a law and secure its submission to the electorate or to the legislature for approval

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:47

though Mr Kan would not be the only one to doubt its sincerity.
原译：though Mr Kan would not be the only one to doubt its sincerity.
评：还是直译吧。

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:49

He appointed a renegade LDP politician, Kazuyuki Hamada, to handle internal affairs in parliament. With that move, Mr Kan managed to incense both the LDP and his own party.
这二句话点出了is giving the impression that he has gone feral.

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:51

Mr Kan’s conditions put the ball back in the LDP’s court, but not for long. Confusingly, on the same day that he set the conditions for his retirement, the prime minister reshuffled his cabinet.
原译：菅直人的三个法案被提交自民党控制的参议院，不久就会出结果。令人困惑的是，就在同一天，菅直人为他的退休设定了条件，他重组了内阁。
评：but not for long指的是on the same day that。。。

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:55

to campaign on a pledge to abandon nuclear power.
原译：以放弃核能的承诺参加首相竞选
评：意谓“将保证放弃核能作为竟选纲领”。

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 09:57

He might even quit, it is whispered, on the anniversary of the bombing on Hiroshima on August 6th, when anti-nuclear feelings run high. 再次暗示feral

引用 wharton323 2011-7-2 10:00

nuclear mess中的mess没有译出。

引用 Sophia2011 2011-7-2 13:01

第一段，

is giving the impression that he has gone feral
原译：给人以无家可归的感觉
试译：让人认为他已经变得很凶残的印象

feral a.3.野兽的；野兽所特有的；凶残的；野蛮的 [英汉大词典]
go 取“变得，成为，处于”等意思

引用 蓝冰 2011-7-3 18:56

On June 28th Mr Kan did nothing to dispel the rumours, telling DPJ politicians that energy policy was likely to be the most important issue in the next election.
6月28日菅直人对谣言未作任何澄清，而是告诉民主党成员能源政策可能是下届选举最重要的问题

引用 rio-oir 2011-7-3 20:23

标题翻译我很喜欢~

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