[2011.11.26] 飞机制造业: 开足马力

引用 migmig 2011-11-28 19:21

zhanyisky 发表于 2011-11-28 16:22
Making aircraft
飞机制造业

有时，飞机制造商高管会抱怨时下航展太多，11月13日~17日，迪拜航展又举行了，但鉴于其所获订单颇丰，还是不虚此行。

“高管”和“其”之间插了“迪拜航展”，使得“其”指代不是很明确。
有时，飞机制造商高管会抱怨时下航展太多，不过鉴于在11月11日至13日迪拜航展上所获订货颇丰，他们还是不虚此行。

引用 migmig 2011-11-28 19:25

55架标价64亿美元
有歧义。这里应该是总价吧？

引用 migmig 2011-11-28 19:31

可能需要飞机
可能所需飞机

引用 migmig 2011-11-28 19:39

因此经济形势严峻，其实会鼓励航空公司加紧更换机型
因此，经济形势严峻其实会鼓励航空公司加紧更换机型

航空业当前，波音与空客两家独大
当前，航空业里波音与空客两家独大

这些飞机制造商与其零部件供应商，能跟上这一势头吗？
这些飞机制造商与其零部件供应商能跟上这一势头吗？

引用 handsome2011 2011-11-28 19:46

学习。

引用 migmig 2011-11-28 19:47

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引用 chengius 2011-11-28 22:11

很棒，学习了

引用 yannanchen 2011-11-29 00:10

list price ， sticker price
买飞机和买汽车


By law, the dealership is responsible for making sure that you understand and have the necessary information required to purchase your new car. This is called the Monroney Law and was passed I 1958. This law is officially called the Monroney Act of 1958. This law states that a sticker called the Monroney sticker is required to be on all new cars and can't be removed by any dealer. The fine for not having this sticker on the front or side window is $10,000 per vehicle. Any tampering with the sticker also carries a heavy fine.

This sticker is important in that it must including several things:

• Manufacturer's Suggested Retail price (also referred to as MSRP or Sticker Price or List Price)• Manufacturers' suggested price for each accessory
• Make
• Model
• Standard options
• The final assembly point
• And several other items

The manufacturer of an automobile suggests the price hence the manufacturer suggested retail price or MSRP. This price does not include the taxes, title, delivery or any other options that may have been added to the vehicle.

The base price is listed on the sticker in the window. There, the base price, the sticker price, the list price and the MSRP are all the same price.

When a dealership purchases a vehicle from a manufacture, they are invoiced for the price of the car. This is called the Dealer invoice price. This doesn't make it the actual price the dealership is going to pay because there are a lot of rebates, discounts and holdbacks involved that lowers the actual cost that the dealer is going to pay. This invoice cost should include delivery and destination charges. This invoice price may increase with the factory-installed options.

The actual price you will pay depends on market conditions, like demand for the vehicle.

To help you understand, consider that a car dealer is a 'reseller' of cars. The dealer buys them from manufacturers like Ford and General Motors then puts them on the lot with the MSRP or 'sticker price'. The mark-up isn't the issue because the dealer is entitled to make a profit; similarly, you are entitled to knock it down.

You should never pay more than 3-5% above the invoice price. Learn what the dealer invoice cost is and use that figure as a place to start your negotiations. You need to remember that all the add-on options are marked up in the same way. So don't go and pay MSRP on the extras like sunroofs, leather trim etc. Find out the invoice prices and do the same thing.

When buying a new vehicle all the different types of prices are confusing. Remember the differences between these and they will help you to make the best decision. As always, do your research before buying.

引用 yannanchen 2011-11-29 00:12

终于实现了期盼多年的业务保障can look forward to years of guaranteed business
不等价

引用 yannanchen 2011-11-29 00:15

Now that Boeing has delivered the first of its long-haul 787 Dreamliners, following problems with suppliers, it is promising to throttle up the programme and turn out ten a month by the end of 2013. 波音既已推出了首架长途客机787“梦想航班”，接下来就是供货问题，它承诺会开足马力实施计划，

翻译的不对啊

引用 yannanchen 2011-11-29 00:17

which is threatening to become as much of a “nightmareliner” as its rival’s plane.这让这款飞机较之对手波音的飞机，有沦为“噩梦航班”之虞。

错的厉害

引用 zhanyisky 2011-11-29 10:42

yannanchen 发表于 2011-11-29 00:12
终于实现了期盼多年的业务保障can look forward to years of guaranteed business
不等价 ...

1、But the two main makers of full-sized commercial jets can look forward to years of guaranteed business, with firm orders at a record (see chart).
原译：终于实现了期盼多年的业务保障
评论：不等价
汗，英文理解能力太差。
改译：但波音与空客这两家全尺寸商用飞机制造商，凭借这一笔笔创纪录的确认订单（见图），可以期待未来数年业务都有所保障。

2、Now that Boeing has delivered the first of its long-haul 787 Dreamliners, following problems with suppliers, it is promising to throttle up the programme and turn out ten a month by the end of 2013.
原译：波音既已推出了首架长途客机787“梦想航班”，接下来就是供货问题，它承诺会开足马力实施计划，到2013年底前，每月生产10架787飞机。
评论：翻译的不对啊
这句是很纠结，但偷懒，没有细究：（
改译：波音既已推出了首架长途客机787“梦想航班”，现正同供应商解决零部件供货问题，因此有望开足马力实施计划，到2013年底前，每月生产10架787飞机。

3、which is threatening to become as much of a “nightmareliner” as its rival’s plane.
原译：这让这款飞机较之对手波音的飞机，有沦为“噩梦航班”之虞。
评论：错的厉害
汗...
改译：这款机型大有沦为像其竞争对手飞机那样的“噩梦航班”之虞。

引用 migmig 2011-11-29 10:49

本着聊胜于无和学习的态度煞有介事地瞎扯淡。所以不必在意。

引用 yannanchen 2011-11-29 15:32

2、Now that Boeing has delivered the first of its long-haul 787 Dreamliners, following problems with suppliers, it is promising to throttle up the programme and turn out ten a month by the end of 2013.
原译：波音既已推出了首架长途客机787“梦想航班”，接下来就是供货问题，它承诺会开足马力实施计划，到2013年底前，每月生产10架787飞机。
评论：翻译的不对啊
这句是很纠结，但偷懒，没有细究：（
改译：波音既已推出了首架长途客机787“梦想航班”，现正同供应商解决零部件供货问题，因此有望开足马力实施计划，到2013年底前，每月生产10架787飞机。

评论： 这句我觉得如果改写可以这样写：
Now that Boeing，following problems with suppliers,  has delivered the first of its long-haul 787 Dreamliners,  it is promising to throttle up the programme and turn out ten a month by the end of 2013.

所以， 还可以写成：

Now that Boeing，after problems with suppliers,  has delivered the first of its long-haul 787 Dreamliners,  it is promising to throttle up the programme and turn out ten a month by the end of 2013.

见葛传规词典p260： following有时用作preposition， 在报纸里特别多见， 例如
Following the ceremony， a reception was held。

引用 yannanchen 2011-11-29 15:38

3、which is threatening to become as much of a “nightmareliner” as its rival’s plane.
原译：这让这款飞机较之对手波音的飞机，有沦为“噩梦航班”之虞。
评论：错的厉害
汗...
改译：这款机型大有沦为像其竞争对手飞机那样的“噩梦航班”之虞。


对手就是波音， 其“梦想航班”，因problems with suppliers， 曾变成“噩梦航班”
dream vs nightmare

空客也可能遭到同样的命运

引用 www.57rz.com 2011-11-29 16:12

都是翻译高手！

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