[2011.05.05] 印度行贿合法化

引用 yannanchen 2011-5-9 02:06

he risks prosecution or, more likely, being asked for another bribe by the police
或者（更有可能的是）被警察询问其他贿赂案件

这是错译

引用 yannanchen 2011-5-9 02:08

These steps, he believes, will align the incentives of those asked for bribes and law-enforcement agencies which seek to prosecute corrupt officials by giving their victims the confidence to lodge complaints and encouraging them to hang on to evidence of bribery. 他认为，这些举措能够校正索贿者和试图通过给予受害者投诉信心和鼓励他们上交贿赂证据来起诉腐败官员的执法机构的激励。

错译

引用 yannanchen 2011-5-9 02:09

Fear of being caught should make officials more wary of asking for bribes in the first place.
担心被抓应该能够让官员在首次伸手前三思而后行。

首次？ 不对

引用 mylta 2011-5-10 07:36

译得很好！

引用 tkb312 2011-5-10 10:49

本帖最后由 tkb312 于 2011-5-10 10:52 编辑

Fear of being caught should make officials more wary of asking for bribes in the first place
因为害怕被抓，官员本来想索贿时会有所犹豫。
in the first place : 本来

引用 SlientSeeker 2011-5-10 17:29

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引用 stillhappy 2011-5-10 17:40

支持一下！

引用 incense 2011-5-10 21:02

These steps, he believes, will align the incentives of those asked for bribes and law-enforcement agencies which seek to prosecute corrupt officials by giving their victims the confidence to lodge complaints and encouraging them to hang on to evidence of bribery.
他相信，通过这一方式，可以调整激励机制，在那些想要收取贿赂的官员和试图控告腐败官员的执法机关之间找到平衡点。建立受害者信心，鼓励其保留贿赂证据并提起诉讼。

我把句子拆开来翻了，全部摆一起有点绕了。擅自加了“找到平衡点”，因为脑子一团浆糊一时想不到有啥更好的说法……那个hang on to是固定搭配，有保留，不卖掉，不放弃；抓紧某物的意思。应该还有更专业的说法，我翻的也不是很好。

Fear of being caught should make officials more wary of asking for bribes in the first place.
in the first place（用于句尾，谈论某事为何或者是否应该做）究竟，到底，当初。
担心被抓应该能够让官员在伸手前三思而后行。（我觉得把首次去掉就可以了。）

引用 wu98586jun 2011-5-10 22:31

引用 wonder041111 2011-5-12 17:01

建议改正

引用 yannanchen 2011-5-12 20:47

a·lign/əˈlīn/Verb
1. Place or arrange (things) in a straight line.
2. Put (things) into correct relative positions.  

引用 yannanchen 2011-5-12 20:50

align the incentives of those asked for bribes and law-enforcement agencies which seek to prosecute corrupt officials by giving their victims the confidence to lodge complaints and encouraging them to hang on to evidence of bribery.
两种人的激励机制需要统一。 一是被人索贿的行贿人， 一是执法机构。

引用 yannanchen 2011-5-12 20:53

he risks prosecution or, more likely, being asked for another bribe by the police
或者（更有可能的是）被警察询问其他贿赂案件

他面临两种风险：一是被起诉， 一（可能性更大）是被警察另行索贿

引用 德州牛仔 2011-5-12 22:47

谢谢楼主辛苦翻译~

引用 苏美女神 2011-5-12 23:06

These steps, he believes, will align the incentives of those asked for bribes and law-enforcement agencies which seek to prosecute corrupt officials by giving their victims the confidence to lodge complaints and encouraging them to hang on to evidence of bribery.
他认为，这些举措可以建立受害者的起诉信心，鼓励他们保留行贿政据，这样便使他们更好地与那些想要起诉腐败官员的执法机构合作。

引用 daiding 2011-5-13 23:09

怎么可能，这样的话虽然可能造成被行贿者因害怕而办事，但也可能会造成报复心理而导致办事效率更低

引用 sisu小鱼 2011-5-14 00:54

有个地方的原文逻辑不太明白，为什么人们获得自己应得的东西一定要行贿呢，如果有办法不用行贿，何乐而不为呢？毕竟是正当权利，如果是为了不正当的事情行贿，才是不得不做的吧？
谁能帮我解答一下啊？

引用 Wennery 2011-5-15 11:49

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因为印度的机构是出名的慢，为应得物贿赂应该是为了加快办事效率。

引用 小法的球鞋 2011-5-15 12:54

These steps, he believes, will align the incentives of those asked for bribes and law-enforcement agencies which seek to prosecute corrupt officials by giving their victims the confidence to lodge complaints and encouraging them to hang on to evidence of bribery.
他相信，这些措施可以鼓励受害人保留贿赂证据，使他们有信心提起诉讼，而这对于那些被要求行贿的受害者和试图对腐败官员提起诉讼的执法机构来说，他们的利益是一致的。（类似于经济学上讲的激励相容）

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